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Quiet


There is nothing that we can tell each other


We just stand there
staring at each other


We wonder what had happened


We used to have so much to say
we had so much to laugh


but now there is just silence


and we turn around and

walk away
...in different directions



Hoping that we'll never meet again


Everything seem said


and it's over, we're done with it

One of my few poems...what do you think guys?
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EminelComicz Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
o no, i'm afraid that'll happen to me. It's just in that awkard stage, you know, where it could either blossom into something more or spiral down like in your poem :( great job though!
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snowwhiteeyes Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
that situation with my ex-bf kinda inspired me to write this :/
thank you ;)
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Puddha1988 Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Awesome work, I went through this exact same thing with a once very good friend, last weekend. Great work, it's very relatable
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snowwhiteeyes Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you :)
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KennieKongLee Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Love it, describes so many passer-bys. Sigh.
Bravo :clap:
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snowwhiteeyes Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you :D
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KennieKongLee Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Youre welcome! :happybounce:
And you didnt have to give me anything! D:
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snowwhiteeyes Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Well thats what I always do...
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KennieKongLee Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thankew ;w;
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snowwhiteeyes Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:)
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